Hilbert wrote:
I use some of this in my novel but who is Yoda? I don't know him...ANyway ehre is an exampel from my novel:
-On my pocket I put it, the beautiful ring I found
-And the river I passed, throught the boat my friend gave me...
It is wrong or they would still publish such a book that is liek a new way of writing? I am confused

Not really sure what it is you're asking, but those 2 sentances should be :IN my pocket I put the beautiful ring I found; and I passed along the river in the boat my friend gave me. I think you said you're from Hungary, so you're still doing really well on your second language. I know some people who were raised with english as their first language and you still know it better than they do.
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